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Love is intricate and sophisicated.
Forsake hopelessness-
And grasp a new light.
A certain slant of evanition,
Opens a heart-
Exposure to a pure breath.
For only you,
Would Heaven open it's refined gates.
Your eyes mirror images of perfection,
Qualities undescribed.
Graceful moments-
From this time to the next,
Reflect premonitions of remorse.
We have a choice to look beyond-
It's precise and to the point.
We'd be helpless separatists,
Without a care in the world.
Blessed upon an angel's wing,
Warmth continues to grow within.
A remedy for bitterness.
Consumed our faith
And nothing's left.
Deep inside the wintry hearts
And withered smiles,
We try to grasp a part of ourselves.
Emotionally complex
And eternal it seems.
Cut up my hatred,
Love - Left with a piece.
What I feel for you,
Is but a dream to me.
©2006-2009 ~xxslashedxx
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Submitted: March 29, 2006
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Everyone has love. We just have to find it in ourselves. And the love I, myself, have found may not be persent in the individual whom my heart desires - so it's all but a very still dream. ( I think everyone knows the boy I wrote this for. ) Oh and the picture was from DaStafiZ, he's cool like that.
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I love the picture
The words make the picture better

Wonderfully written

:blackrose: Phantom

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~poof~
Thank you. You are a charming one, aren't you?

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..
I love how you ended the poem. The words are intricate and flow well overall. Nice job :D

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"I guess all I have left to do now is...live." - Jarren King
Thank you...:blowkiss:

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..
You're welcome... :hug:

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"I guess all I have left to do now is...live." - Jarren King
You're Welcome

Thank You

:blackrose: Phantom

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~poof~
Wow i love this, its beautiful. And so sweet... he must be something real special =) each and every word creates a image in my mind, like flickering through movie scenes. :hug:

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I feel sick. Am I contagious? Do you feel it? Cause I can see it in your eyes, Disgust.
Cool. Yeah, he does mean something to me. But I'm thinking of writing another and giving it to him and seeing what he says to me... It's rather boring with him NOT knowing I like him... But thanks for the imagery comment. Somethings that how I start to write something, I use imageryy...

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..
mmhmm

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..

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