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Love is intricate and sophisicated.
Forsake hopelessness-
And grasp a new light.
A certain slant of evanition,
Opens a heart-
Exposure to a pure breath.
For only you,
Would Heaven open it's refined gates.
Your eyes mirror images of perfection,
Qualities undescribed.
Graceful moments-
From this time to the next,
Reflect premonitions of remorse.
We have a choice to look beyond-
It's precise and to the point.
We'd be helpless separatists,
Without a care in the world.
Blessed upon an angel's wing,
Warmth continues to grow within.
A remedy for bitterness.
Consumed our faith
And nothing's left.
Deep inside the wintry hearts
And withered smiles,
We try to grasp a part of ourselves.
Emotionally complex
And eternal it seems.
Cut up my hatred,
Love - Left with a piece.
What I feel for you,
Is but a dream to me.
©2006-2009 ~xxslashedxx
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Author's Comments

Everyone has love. We just have to find it in ourselves. And the love I, myself, have found may not be persent in the individual whom my heart desires - so it's all but a very still dream. ( I think everyone knows the boy I wrote this for. ) Oh and the picture was from DaStafiZ, he's cool like that.

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:iconphantom-lover:
I love the picture
The words make the picture better

Wonderfully written

:blackrose: Phantom

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~poof~
:iconxxslashedxx:
Thank you. You are a charming one, aren't you?

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..
:iconmaximusgermaine:
I love how you ended the poem. The words are intricate and flow well overall. Nice job :D

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"I guess all I have left to do now is...live." - Jarren King
:iconxxslashedxx:
Thank you...:blowkiss:

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..
:iconmaximusgermaine:
You're welcome... :hug:

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"I guess all I have left to do now is...live." - Jarren King
:iconphantom-lover:
You're Welcome

Thank You

:blackrose: Phantom

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~poof~
:iconpiercingmyheart:
Wow i love this, its beautiful. And so sweet... he must be something real special =) each and every word creates a image in my mind, like flickering through movie scenes. :hug:

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I feel sick. Am I contagious? Do you feel it? Cause I can see it in your eyes, Disgust.
:iconxxslashedxx:
Cool. Yeah, he does mean something to me. But I'm thinking of writing another and giving it to him and seeing what he says to me... It's rather boring with him NOT knowing I like him... But thanks for the imagery comment. Somethings that how I start to write something, I use imageryy...

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..
:iconxxslashedxx:
mmhmm

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...yellow is the colour of decay and duplicity, the colour of broken promises...

..i heart alex varkatzas..

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